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Storyboard - 'Reality Bytes' - Scene - Sneaking in

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Something i've been wanting to show for a long time! this is a storyboard scene from my pilot i wish to make ever since i was little! :)

The synopsis behind this is the kids of middletown have been brainwashed and made as slaves by a new virtual reality gaming headset that just came on the market. One of scott and buster's friends became victim to it and they must save her before she becomes a mindless drone. In this scene they form a plan together to sneak in.

Hope you guys like this :)
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

Sorry I wasn't able to give you some feedback right away, I wanted to leave something a little more thoughtful than just 'nice!' but didn't have any consistent time to sit down and do so. Ummm, this is amazing. I can't believe you actually did this, can't tell the difference between this and a professional story board. The timing is great and I just love how you make the emphasis on facial expressions to give us the moment and move things a long. A lot of story boarders don't seem to get that. As for the story, although it's been done before, I find the idea of kids being brainwashed into slaves a very interesting one with lots of potential. Overall, this is perhaps one of the most interesting I've seen from you so far and of all you've attempted to animate, this one looks by far the most interesting story wise and the most appealing visually and would love to see an entire short film on it, even if it's not fully animated. Animatic would be fine and sound would be grand (if it's possible of course). What I think really sticks out about this one is your execution. Classic cartoon trope, but the their interaction and dialogue about it is not only hilarious, it's refreshing as well to see some self awareness on it. I've always had faith in Buster and Scott, I just wanted to see it happen. This not only shows that it can, it shows your ability to make it happen to their full potential. Really happy to see this from you James and I really hope to see more from you in the future.